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Storyline and Chapter Updates!
Fri May 28, 2010 2:10 am by Icarus
I am proud to say that the brief History of God's War that will answer most questions, including who is Fate is now posted on the Plot and Update forum. Also, I have posted our First Chapter which is named "The Four Horsemen" that should be finished within two months. This First Chapter will be the basis of events during its run as well as most RPs.

Here are the links you should check …

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Mon May 24, 2010 12:44 am by Icarus
Hello, I would like to say that the site has been running great! But we need more players if were going to keep running, we also need more people to start RPing, so go and do your applications as early as you can.

The more players you invite, the more fun the site will be!

Thank you!

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PostSubject: Uriel ; Supremo Isa.   Mon May 24, 2010 9:12 am

About Uriel

Name: Uriel.
Alignment: Good
Supremo: Isa
Nickname: Not available.
Age: 2800

Appearance

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Wing Appearance:

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Weapon

Weapon Name: Dawncalibur

Weapon Ability: Dawncalibur doubles the weight of any object it strikes. The ability can affect both inanimate objects and living beings, and is cumulative. For example, the first strike on an opponent wielding a 10 lb sword doubles the opposing sword's weight to 20 lbs. If Uriel strikes the sword a second time, the weight of the sword doubles to 40 lbs. Uriel can continue doubling the weight of his opponent's sword indefinitely. After about eight or nine strikes, most opponents would be unable to lift their swords and are brought down to their knees by the weight of their own weapon. Though the potential of this ability is limitless, a small number of strikes to an opponent's blade is usually all that is needed to render them immobile.

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Abilities

Wing Incantation:
Reveal yourself and scatter your light upon the world.

Wing Abilities:

  • Shinjou (Mentality): This could be described as the physical ability of Uriel. Shinjou is the ability that gave Uriel his current position. All the other angels were impressed by this ability because it was passive and always active. I'd say you need to be higher than number five to actually fight against me. If not then you won't able to affect Naiya that much. And even so keep in mind of Saise.

- Saisei (Regeneration): Uriel can quickly regenerate any part of his body except for his brain. It belongs to shinjou which makes it passive and always active.

- Naiya (Diamond): Uriel has a diamond-hard skin strong enough to block a sword or bullet. This also allows him to fight sword-wielding opponents barehanded. He can deflect attacks of similar power barehanded. It belongs to shinjou which makes it passive and always active.

- Ryoku (Strength): Uriel has tremendous physical strength and is able to easily and swiftly put a large hole into the chest of a weaker opponent without much effort at all, using only his bare hands. This strength goes as far tearing off the arms of an opponent with bare hands. If the opponent is regular he can effortlessly shatter the whole body into pieces with one blow. It belongs to shinjou which makes it passive and always active.


  • Saga (Customized): Uriel drops Dawncalibur from his hands. The sword phases into the ground, as though it were a pool of water. Energy ripples expand out, turning the surrounding area dark, and within seconds, two rows of a thousand giant blades rise up from the ground. Those thousand swords then scatter and countless flying blades pierce the enemy. No one knows the exact number of blades generated and no one can see the movements of those blades or even dodge them. The number of blades is great enough that Uriel can use them for defense as well as offense at the same time. He commonly forms them into large masses, designed to obliterate opponents instantaneously. As it moves through the air like torrents of waves. This technique is entirely mentally controlled.

- Senkei (Slaughterscape): Uriel unites the the scattered petals into complete glowing swords, numbering in the thousands, that form four rows. These rows float just above the other, and circle around Uriel and his opponent in a continuously moving, column-like array. It abandons defense in favor of a concentrated offense. Though visually menacing, this form is not meant for attack from all sides; rather, it is to concentrate his power into fewer blades, thus increasing his attack power. While Uriel can mentally control these swords as he does his regular blades, he commonly calls them to his hands for actual melee combat. When in his hand, they lose their glow, and take the form of his unreleased weapon. While they seem solid in this state, the swords can just as easily dissipate back into the multitude of tiny blades that they are made up of. The Senkei also cages himself with his enemy, allowing neither combatant to move very far from each other, though the area is still large enough for maneuverability. The most effective use of the Senkei form is that it allows for use of all the swords at the same attack level, making it highly versatile as a way to effectively defeat an enemy unaware of the danger of the situation. Senkei stays activated for ten posts or whenever Uriel decides to scatter the blades again. After the ten posts they return back to scattered blades.

- Gokei (Mawscape): This form increases the number of tiny blades immensely. It creates a spherical formation of innumerable blade fragments, which swirl around the opponent like a cloud. It then flies into them from every possible angle, leaving no blind spots and no possibility to escape. It then collapses on itself, obliterating the opponent. It is strong enough to completely obliterate a very large building from the inside out. Gokei stays activated for two posts has a cool down of six posts.


  • Awai (Light): Uriel's angelic court of light. Aiwa is used to sentence someone to a punishment.

- Shinmon (Interrogation): Creates an inverted pyramid-shaped barrier around the opponent. Nothing is able to leave it, but everything is able to enter it. Shinmon stay activated for five posts. It can also be broken after two posts by an opponent which possess over power that equals Supremo Aplat or higher.Cool down of five posts.

- Mugon (Silence): Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in a truly enormous explosion. Cool down of four posts.

- Hantei (Judgement): Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams. Able to hold an opponent for five posts. Or be broken after two posts by someone who equals Supremo Aplat or higher. Cool down of five posts.

- Bachi (Punishment): Forms a box of black energy around a target, which is then pierced by dozens of energy "spears," lacerating the one inside from head to toe. Its appearance and function is reminiscent of a common magician's trick, as well as certain torture devices used during the Spanish Inquisition. This is the final technique in the row of Uriel's court. Cool down of ten posts.


  • Uchuu (Space): This could be called the most fearful ability of Uriel. Because uchuu gives him the ability of the intergalactic world. Which means the stars, meteors, moon and much more. Each aspect turned into an attack. Few have witnessed uchuu and survived. But they bear the marks for their entire life. Uchuu has a drawback compared to the other abilities. Since Uriel can't heal his brain he will suffer from headaches and eventually light amnesia.
- Shinsei (Supernova): This is extremely luminous and causes a burst of radiation that briefly outshines an entire galaxy. During this short interval shinsei can radiate as much energy as the Sun is expected to emit over its entire life span. It's beam that does not explode but implode whatever it hits. It dematerializes what it hits. For example: Hole in a chest, or an arm. Though it can only be used once per battle.


- Kuro (Black): A sign of ultimate defense that he marked as kuro. A black hole opens and takes out the entire attack of the opponent. The black hole is a region of space from which nothing, including light, can escape. It is the result of the deformation of spacetime caused by a very compact mass. Around a black hole there is an undetectable surface which marks the point of no return, called an event horizon. It is called "black" because it absorbs all the light and energy that hits it, reflecting nothing. Cool down of five posts.

- Shiroi (White): Uriel's creates a white hole that returns the absorbed amount of power by Kuro. Uriel's white hole in general relativity, is a region of spacetime which cannot be entered from the outside, but from which matter and light may escape. In this sense it is the reverse of a black hole, which can be entered from the outside, but from which nothing including light may escape. After absorbing all the energy with kuro he can afterwards release it with shiroi. Cool down of six posts.

- Sougon (Gravity): With his technique Uriel is able to change the gravity level. It will affect everyone in the area even allies except for Uriel. He could rise the pressure to make things heavier and make people feel a lot heavier. Or he could even lower the pressure so people will start to float. The effects stay applied for six posts or till Uriel deactivates it. It has a cool down of five post.

Personal

Personality: Uriel has relaxed voice, and a carefree and emotionless look on his face. In serious situations, however, he is shown to have a very stern and intense look. He is calm in most situations. Uriel doesn't show signs of arrogance, and is rather modest about his abilities. His naturally calm attitude is used to his advantage in battle, as it becomes easier for him to maintain his composure to stay focused on the situation at hand, and ultimately notice everything around him. As a result, he can quickly adjust to any situation to make keen and thought-out decisions, allowing him to stay steps ahead of his opponents.

History: When Uriel was alive he was scared and unsure of his place in the world, he desired to help those he cared about, but never knew how. Nevertheless, he was a talented and gifted boy. He had a kind heart, too kind. He thought that if he didn't do anything wrong to anybody, nobody would do anything wrong to him. He soon realized that he was wrong and that it was a cold world. His parents were brutally murdered. Uriel felt like his whole world fell apart. He ran outside screaming and crying for help but nobody responded. He had nothing left anymore and decided to leave into the woods.

Weird noises were being heard by Uriel as he walked through the dark woods, hearing bushes and twigs move around the area, always, just in case, keeping his guard up. His body trembled because of the thought that he was all alone, deciding to create a small camp in the middle of the forest, to spend the night. As he sat there, having made a campfire, the noises were still being made by whoever there. A few minutes later, he fell asleep, the campfire still on. When he woke up he tried to search for a way out. After a couple of minutes the sounds were head again. But this time the noises became louder with each second that passed.

At one moment, Uriel was completely frozen, not being able to move anymore as his body trembled even more than the day before. Trees behind his back cracked and fell upon the ground as he quickly turned himself and faced the threat that had been heard the entire time. It turned out to be the murderers of his parents, they needed to get rid of the evidence. And unfortunately Uriel was the evidence. They shot him right through his chest several times. He died out there in the woods.

Angel.

Few moments later he woke up again. They pushed him around and asked him questions. He was not sure what to do. The voice became louder "Do you believe in Fate?" Uriel shaked his head and replied "No, I hate you." He wasn't scared about the de consequences of his answer. But slowly his eyes started to get heavy and he fell asleep. "Thou shall be an Angel." was the last thing he heard. He didn't knew how much times passed by when he woke up again. He stood up with a major headache. Suddenly he noticed that he was carrying a sword in his hand. Unlike the others around him he did not question it. As time passed by he got stronger and stronger. Defeated many demons and gained a large reputation among the other angels. His abilities were noticed by the Supremo. They invited Uriel over for a meeting.

He was sitting behind a table in a meeting room. Not quite sure what to say to them. Suddenly the old man started to speak "Uriel, times have changed. We need all need to do the thing that we think is right. It is a time of war and I need a successor. Son, do you think you can handle it?" All the other Supremo looked shocked towards their leader Supremo Isa. "How can a kid handle this position? I believe I'm a much better candidate!" They started to argue with each other but the old man slammed his fist on the table. "SILENCE." Nobody spoke anymore. "Uriel, what do you think about it? You're a genius that comes once every generation. It is just a matter of time before you surpass me."

Uriel wasn't quite sure what to answer. Was he actually the man that could be standing above all these other Supremo? But that old man was wise and leaded this group for centuries. If he said that Uriel was able to do this, then maybe he could. "Alright, I accept your offer." From that moment on the Supremo Isa retired and gave his position to Uriel and handed him over the Supremo Isa glove. All the other Supremo were shocked but accepted Uriel as their new leader. After a while they all realized Uriel's powers and leadership qualities. He might be the person that changed the Valhalla.



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PostSubject: Re: Uriel ; Supremo Isa.   Mon May 24, 2010 9:24 am

Mind adding a duration to your skills? Like how long it lasts for. Sougon looks pretty imbalanced towards the humans though. Hantei needs a limit.
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PostSubject: Re: Uriel ; Supremo Isa.   Mon May 24, 2010 9:39 am

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Uriel ; Supremo Isa.   Mon May 24, 2010 9:50 am

Hi, I will be reviewing your app, Uriel.

I hope you don't mind, but since your Supremo Isa we will go to all lengths to make sure you are the best for the part, so let's do some reviewing.

1. Please add some weaknesses for your always passive abilities, as well as how strong an enemy should be in order for them to match up to the powers of these abilities.

2. Shinsei is too strong don't you think? Please nerf it that it isn't radiating the power of a sun in a fraction of a second, maybe in alot longer time or a less powerful form.

3. I don't really get Shiroi, please elaborate upon this ability a bit more.

That is all. Thank You!
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PostSubject: Re: Uriel ; Supremo Isa.   Mon May 24, 2010 9:56 am

What about now?
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PostSubject: Re: Uriel ; Supremo Isa.   Mon May 24, 2010 10:01 am

All seems good, I guess.

Get ready to edit this application as you RP, and if there is any form of overpowered techniques that were overlooked, make sure to be ready to edit them accordingly as you will be the most powerful angel in the Opposition.

Character Approved

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