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Storyline and Chapter Updates!
Fri May 28, 2010 2:10 am by Icarus
I am proud to say that the brief History of God's War that will answer most questions, including who is Fate is now posted on the Plot and Update forum. Also, I have posted our First Chapter which is named "The Four Horsemen" that should be finished within two months. This First Chapter will be the basis of events during its run as well as most RPs.

Here are the links you should check …

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Good news!
Mon May 24, 2010 12:44 am by Icarus
Hello, I would like to say that the site has been running great! But we need more players if were going to keep running, we also need more people to start RPing, so go and do your applications as early as you can.

The more players you invite, the more fun the site will be!

Thank you!

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PostSubject: adam speed   Sat May 22, 2010 5:45 am

Name:Adam speed
Alignment:good
Supremo:n/a
Nickname:speed
Age:13

Appearance:white hair,cherry red eyes,gray cloths with graish wings
Wing Appearance:light large gray wings.

Weapon Name: light speed.

Weapon Appearance:a sword that is a all white color.

Weapon True Form:a sharp blade pure as snow white scythe.

Wing Incantation:the come out small then grow big

Wing Abilities:to control the wind element,making whirlwinds,making a powerfull shield,moving at hyper speed.

Personality:adam is a nice person.he is a hard person to get mad.he will not take no for an anwser for somethin the he think is important.likes to talk walks on sunny dayd on earth.can make other friends with angels easy.
like to eat ramen in the human world.wants to be a master at the scythe and perfect his abilitys.

History:adam was made in 10/23/96.he liked to fight so got kicked out of alot of angel activity's but he did not fight any one after.he liked to stay in the clouds and watch the humans.he liked to watch the human kids play.he grew his wings when he was 9.did not like having the wings but got use to them.another angel made his weapon for him because they thought he was pure as white snow and was nice.hated to pratice with weapon and thought it was stupid.


RP Sample:adam came down from the light blue sky with with his
gray looking wing receding into his spinal cord.adam looked around with his cherry red eyes looking at the little kids on the huge play ground messing around with one another.he walked started to walk tworad the park.Adam walked along the path of the park on the shiny beatiful day.he sat down on a bench in the park enjoying the beatiful day on earth.After the day was done adam spred his large gray wings and flew away.
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PostSubject: Re: adam speed   Sat May 22, 2010 12:43 pm

Alright adam here's the things you need to work on to get this approved:

adam is a nice person.he is a hard person to get mad.he will not take no for an anwser for somethin the he think is important.likes to talk walks on sunny dayd on earth.can make other friends with angels easy.
like to eat ramen in the human world.wants to be a master at the scythe and perfect his abilitys.

Grammar is very important when it comes to rp, which means no sentence fragments, and make sure to use punctuation, so your personality should look a little something like this.

Adam is a nice person, he is very calm so he doesn't get mad easily, also, he won't take no for an awnser once he's made up his mind.

That's pretty much all there is in your personality everything else is likes/goals.

For your wing incantation it needs to be an actual Incantation, not what they do, for an example, mine is "Slash through the enemy's bone and turn their blood to dust"

Last but not least, your history needs to include some of your human life, when you die, your convorsation with fate, and your life as an angel. As far as your rp sample goes, try to make it at least 3 paragraphs, to do this I would suggest using a former rp between you and somebody else, or if you don't have one, ask someone if they'd like to rp with you for your rp sample.
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